Re: FN-FORUM Site Check Please

date posted 4th January 2001 15:35

Re site check

Omnipotence means all powerful - are your IT services really God-like??
Omnipresence is nearer to what you are attempting to describe, although it's
rather pretentious - Universal would be better or even ubiquitous, if you're
looking for a more unusual term.
Other than that the heading 'Profile' looks terrible to me as the f & i are
touching.

On the solutions page........
We can offer our clients
bespoke development in two principal ways (but you go on to list FOUR)
as an independent software developer, designing and
delivering turnkey solutions
as a skills provider, equipping the client with a
consultant with relevant expertise
as a project manager, being able to manage and design
projects according to Prince 2 and BS 9764 standards
as a web developer, being able to develop a web solution
that is truly bespoke and developed in the best technology for its
use.
.........This last one is camping out on the edges of correct grammar ;-)
I'd change it so it makes more sense

Sorry to be critical but that's what happens when you ask for opinions on
projects when they're far from finished...... but the Arkad logo has now
appeared and that's quite good!
Cheers, Paul.

P J White
www.BW3.co.uk

----- Original Message -----
From: "Darren Spink" [EMAIL REMOVED]
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Thursday, January 04, 2001 2:49 PM
Subject: RE: FN-FORUM Site Check Please


> Thanks for everyones help so far, I have made a couple of changes if
anyone
> is able to take another look.
>
> For those who wanted to know (Probably no one) the code for the right
click
> message, it is at the bottom of this mail.
>
> Regards
> Darren Spink