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Re: FN-FORUM could you give your opinion please.
date posted 19th July 2001 18:44
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Thank you. Thank you to all of you who bothered to help me today. I DO =
appreciate it. Thank you to John for his proof reading. I had some of =
the copy done over a year ago by a American lady which explains the =
Americanism ( ize - ise etc).=20
May you loins be fruitful and your fruit ripe.
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From: John Brunsdon=20
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Thursday, July 19, 2001 6:02 PM
Subject: Re: FN-FORUM could you give your opinion please.
Paul
Here are some typos and other points I've noticed:
General
You use "web site" and "website" on your site.
'About' section
1) Para 1 - "Put your business on the Web Fat Cat Design, situated in =
Bury
St. Edmunds in England, is the sole performance of Paul Cooklin" - =
"the sole
performance" is an odd way of saying "run by" or "owned by", if that =
is what
you mean. Why not simply "Put your business on the Web by using Fat =
Cat
Design, situated in Bury St. Edmunds in England, owned and run by Paul
Cooklin."
2) Para 2 - "Whether" and "if" in the same sentence is unnecessary. I
suggest "Whether your business is built upon tradition or pushing the =
bounds
of convention..."
3) Para 2 - "is anopportunity", a space is needed after "an"
'Services' section
'Bronze Cat' - "A Domain name of your choice (.co.uk / .com) Web =
Hosting for
one year Up to 400 words Up to 4 scanned images Watermark of your =
company
logo as a background Search Engine submission
1 E-mail account ( i.e. [EMAIL REMOVED] Additional pages and =
graphics
can be added as required" - I suggest that the layout here should =
follow
similar lists on this page, ie
"A Domain name of your choice (.co.uk / .com)
Web Hosting for one year
Up to 400 words
Up to 4 scanned images
Watermark of your company logo as a background Search Engine =
submission
1 E-mail account ( i.e. [EMAIL REMOVED]
Additional pages and graphics can be added as required"
'Hit Counters + Statistics' - "statistical analasys" should read
"statistical analysis"; "site referrers" - "site referrals"?; "search =
engine
referres" - "search engine referrals"
'Bespoke Design - Overview' - "we analyze you needs" - I suggest "we =
analyse
your needs"; "Animated GIF's" - I suggest "Animated GIFs"
Hope this helps
John
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From: "Paul Cooklin (egroups)" [EMAIL REMOVED]
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Thursday, July 19, 2001 11:34 AM
Subject: FN-FORUM could you give your opinion please.
Hello All,
I have been busy changing my site as I have some 'FREE' time. Would =
you be
kind and take a look. I am interested to hear about the overall look =
and
feel and if it looks proffessional. I made some changes to the colour =
and
from where Im sitting it looks good, but it's one of those things that =
you
wake up one day and wonder what you were thinking. I did wake up today =
and I
still like it.
Is there anything else you think I should add. I have left it alone =
for a
long while, and now I've started...I just can't stop.
Many thanks.
Paul.
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Thank you. Thank you to all of you who bothered to =
help me=20
today. I DO appreciate it. Thank you to John for his proof reading. I =
had some=20
of the copy done over a year ago by a American lady which explains the=20
Americanism ( ize - ise etc).
May you loins be fruitful and your fruit =
ripe.
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