Re: FN-FORUM url would probably help :-))

date posted 8th June 2002 12:23

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Wow, I seem to have got off light this time, everyone must be off with
hangovers after last night :-)



Lists wrote:

>Home page
>
>Para 2. "Years" should be all lower case unless you're a Victorian ;-p
>
>Need a full stop after "one we live by" instead of a comma. (I'd also say
>there were rather a lot of missing commas. But hey, who needs to breathe?)
>
>Typo "guarentee"
> word document - Word should be capitalised as it's a product name
>
>Missing graphic at bottom left corner until I refreshed a few times.
>(broadband Win2k ie6)
>
>No checks on form to see if it's been filled in, but it doesn't look as
>though you done that page yet (no background colours etc)
>
>How we Work
>
>Having an uppercase O in Overall makes it sound like something Mrs Mop wears
>(not what it's supposed to be)
>Typo "e.mail"
>
>Case Studies
>
>Inconsistent punctuation in bullet points
>There's a sort of bite out of the curved graphic at the bottom right
>
>
>I'm assuming it's the client's text, as it all sounds rather stilted and
>awkward, and impersonal.
>(Don't forget to update the "flowers used" text, will you...)
>
>Kathy
>
>----- Original Message -----
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>Sent: Saturday, June 08, 2002 9:49 AM
>Subject: FN-FORUM url would probably help :-))
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>>http://www.fatfriar.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/BFDS/indexnf.htm
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Wow, I seem to have got off light this time, everyone must be off with hangovers
after last night :-)



Lists wrote: