Re: FN-FORUM Newbie and curious

date posted 5th September 2002 15:39

Just for starters:

Articles page: .dpf instead of .pdf. Lots of missing commas. Read it out
loud and remember you are allowed to breathe of pause *only* at punctuation
marks.

attributation details Not English!! Byline or attribution might do.

Subscription page: Typo - recieve

in form "inreceiving" missing space.
Yes/No check boxes should be option buttons and are rather a long way from
the text.

Bookstore: navigation changes sides and frame is too small to display it
without scrolling
"ourselves" should be us. You talk about paypal and Nochex without first
mentioning that these are the services you are using.

Typos "whre" "recieve" "ar only "

First book typo "Unnavailable"

A proof read might be in order...
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Kathy
http://www.vendetta.co.uk
DNRC Minister for Useful but Irritating Information and Trivia
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Keith Atkinson" [EMAIL REMOVED]
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Thursday, September 05, 2002 12:14 PM
Subject: Re: FN-FORUM Newbie and curious


Thanks for your reply, I have answered below.

Any suggestions on content also appreciated.

Thanks again

Keith
----- Original Message -----
From: "The British Students Art Collection" [EMAIL REMOVED]
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Thursday, September 05, 2002 11:21 AM
Subject: Re: FN-FORUM Newbie and curious


Hello Keith
Welcome to the group

I think this is appropriate
you may find this interesting
http://www.tbsac.freeserve.co.uk/history.htm

Deaf and dumb love looking at your sea life etc
we hope to be making a donation in the future to them
Maybe we can help get visitors to your site in the future through some
combined effort/press publicity when we make the donation.
All help much appreciated!
Do your advertisers sell fish tanks and alike? or trips to aquariums?
or a list of shops for people to buy?
Advertisers will be from any of the industries which have an involvement in
the aquarium industry.
So there will be Manufacturers and shops advertising throughout, with
articles on reef protection, public aquariums, government policy, how to
look after fish, free to use classified section, bookshop etc. etc.
Will you have a picture gallery?
Yes, people will have the opportunity to upload their images and articles of
thier experiences.
I am getting a massive projection screen in the lounge
where i will have a fish tank screen saver.
(not sure i can get a plasma screen big enough for under £1500)?

anyone?


----- Original Message -----
From: Keith Atkinson
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: 05 September 2002 10:42
Subject: FN-FORUM Newbie and curious


Hi all, I am new to the list and seeing people commenting on others websites
am just curious and would like your comments on one of my sites:

www.reeflife.net

Probably a long way off from what you are used to, so please bear my newness
in mind before slating it ;-)

Thanks

Keith


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