RE: FN-FORUM Site Check please.

date posted 6th September 2002 20:53

Kathy,
thankyou for your excellent comments... grammar is not my strong point, so
your input is very much appreciated.

Dave.

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Dave Boulden, Director. DA Media Limited
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Typo "our products can be utitlized "

?? "companies databases corporate-wide" Could this mean "company's databases
across the entire organization" (or organisation if you prefer the French
spelling)?

"whilst only allowing the right people to see the" should be something like
"while allowing only the right people to see the" (or TASER provides..., but
allows only)

Stray space before full stop: (01795) 559456 .

Stray colon: "your first contact with us is on-line: We would be". Perhaps a
comma...?

"In brief" Is this usual in your industry? I've heard "in short" more often.

"specialty is in the area of bespoke " = lose the "in the area of"

HTH

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Kathy
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DNRC Minister for Useful but Irritating Information and Trivia
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----- Original Message -----
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Sent: Friday, September 06, 2002 5:11 PM
Subject: FN-FORUM Site Check please.


> Hi Guys,
> OK.. time to take the plunge. Can I have a site check of my company
> website, please.
>
> http://www.da-media.co.uk/
>
> I'm having problems with Opera compatibility and can't get the menu bars
to
> pop-out when clicked.. seems to work in all other recent browsers. Please
> bare in mind that I'm a coder not a designer!!
> All criticism welcomed... as long as it's constructive ;o)
> BTW, it is an ongoing project... still some 'tarting-up' to do via some
> extra CSS.
>
> thanks,
>
> Dave.
>
> P.S. Yes, I've sent the message again, as I forgot to set a meaningful
> subject on the last one.. DOH!
>
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