Re: FN-FORUM Morning =)

date posted 7th September 2002 09:43

You haven't set your background colour.

What is "News Achieve" ? My guess is "News Archive" or "News - Achievements"

Services "to better help you" sounds a bit strange

Web design services page

apostrophe abuse "Design Fee's"
Quartly & 'every 6 months' = Quarterly and six-monthly/biannual
Why does Design always begin with a capital?
Typo: "taloured to your business needs"
More apostrophe abuse "10 Photo's", "12 Free photo's","Every 6 Month's"

OK. You desperately need a proof read!

HTH
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Kathy
http://www.vendetta.co.uk
DNRC Minister for Useful but Irritating Information and Trivia
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----- Original Message -----
From: "Ryan Kirkaldy" [EMAIL REMOVED]
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Saturday, September 07, 2002 1:23 AM
Subject: FN-FORUM Morning =)


Morning =)

first post to this mailing list.

Was wondering if i could get some opinions on my website, its finished (
part from meta tags etc ), also it would be nice to know if its working on
all browsers, i've checked it on netscape7 and internet explorer 6, any
previous versions and other browsers you guys might be using would be useful
to know if its all working 100% =).

www.tourismsw.co.uk

I've built up a letter to go with it, this is lowest quality version for the
net so it isn't too large, ( 500kb aprox ) , full version is max quality /
print quality.
www.tourismsw.co.uk/lettertswlow.jpg


Any and all opinions welcome on both the letter and the website =).

Thanks.

Regards,
Ryan Kirkaldy
Tourism SouthWest - Web Design Specialists
www.tourismsw.co.uk
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