RE: FN-FORUM: Site Check Please

date posted 27th November 2003 21:57

Thanks Tam, all feedback is good even negative! I have some changes to
make and all your points are excellent I appreciate you taking the time.

Thanks,
Paul.

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From: [EMAIL REMOVED] [EMAIL REMOVED] On Behalf Of Tam
Stone
Sent: 27 November 2003 21:58
To: FN-FORUM / [EMAIL REMOVED]
Subject: Re: FN-FORUM: Site Check Please



Hiya,

The top graphics are horribly pixelly jpgs.

From your frontpage I thought you were selling computer monitors.

Theres quite abit of distracting movement, though only on the first page

so I can probably forgive that.

That many colours make it look abit cluttered, blue up top, purple down
bottom, blue, green and yellow in the menu, text blue, black & red. And
abit of orange thrown in on the rollovers for luck.

The sidemenu is handy once you get in deeper but it doesn't appear on
the first page. By the time I get down to a particular product range I
have four menus to choose from!! The grey 'product demo' etc. ones don't

fit the rest of the layout.

I likt colour coding the prodicts but I think it would work better if
you reduced the number of colours used elsewhere.

I wouldn't use '4' instead of 'for' if your targeting anyone other than
young people.

The 'protques' which appears across the modual detail is to dark, it
reminds me of the 'sample' stamp instead of branding. Makes it hard to
red the text and isn't inkeeping with the rest of the design. Also its
orange when I clicked on the blue product if your going to colour code
your products use that colour consitently.

One other thing I've been browsing around (not reading text other than
links) and it just occured to me I have no idea what your software does.

Perhaps you could find images that convey it better on the front page.

Sorry if the above all sounds negative, I just picked out the parts I
didn't like :)

Tam

Kalagoo.Com wrote:

>Hi fellow freelancers...
>
>Looking for a site check and constructive comments on
>http://194.130.16.55 (temporary location) some content still being
>updated - not important, database driven CMS, dont worry about lack of
>meta-tags etc, working on that. More interested in your opinion of the
>look/feel/navigational aspect of the site - any feedback most welcome.
>
>I am aware of the following:
>
>no meta-tags
>e-commerce part missing
>some pages not much content
>
>Site is a redesign of http://www.proquis.com for refrerence.
>
>Many Thanx in advance,
>Paul.
>
>
>
>
>



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