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RE: FN-FORUM: FW: ADH WebCreations
date posted 28th June 2007 18:40
Thanks for all that I've made all the amendments (I think, probably
missed something).
All the were used while learning css, didn't know any other way,
and have now been taken out as has the font tag.
Thanks
Ashley
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From: [EMAIL REMOVED] [EMAIL REMOVED] On Behalf Of Lists
(Kathy)
Sent: 28 June 2007 18:05
To: FN-FORUM / [EMAIL REMOVED]
Subject: Re: FN-FORUM: FW: ADH WebCreations
I'm sure small business customers will find your site easy to use, but
you don't believe in full stops, do you? (As I've said this, this
message will be full of errors, Always happens)
I think you need a copy editor or to do some research on punctuation.
Not a designer or a developer, so not many comments on that - but it
does look odd where link text is larger than the surrounding text.
What's with the multiple ? And why even bother with CSS if you are
going to use a font tag? I haven't seen one of those in years.
Typos:
(home)
"we'll help you get a on the web and "
Why an ampersand here, but and everywhere else? "product & service
information "
(hosting)
" web hosting plans main features" missing apostrophe
"All of our website hosting email accounts can be accessed via webmail
or programs such as Outlook and also come with the following features."
That is just weird. The list of features that follows in is no way
related to email accounts.
(seo)
"Throughtout the the process "
"can easy find you"
(website support)
"competetive prices"
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Illiteracy (too bad to be excused as a typo)
(SEO)
"if your American or SEO if your lazy"
"monitor it's progess"
(Website support)
"but it's contents is out of date?"
ALSO
Random use of capitals
Inconsistent use of z and s (ise, ize) spelling. Either be European like
Tony Blair and use -ise throughout, be right like the OED and use the
correct version, or be American and use -ize throughout.
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From: "ADH WebCreations" [EMAIL REMOVED]
To: [EMAIL REMOVED]
Sent: Thursday, June 28, 2007 4:43 PM
Subject: FN-FORUM: FW: ADH WebCreations
Hi,
I've seen people ask everybody's opinion about their websites and the
brutal feedback - although pretty much always justified!!
Figured it was time to throw my site out to the wolfs -
www.adhwebcreations.co.uk
Only been using divs/css for the past 6 or so months and still learning
a lot so no doubt I've over complicated something. It's nothing
exciting and there's no flash or anything like that but thought I'd draw
on the experience of the list.
Any recommendations welcome.!
Kind regards
Ashley Harvey
ADH WebCreations
07967 791738
www.adhwebcreations.co.uk
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